Presentation (study task three) message and delivery (OUGD403)

In the intermediate crit we were told the other group liked our layout and would want to read it if they saw it in a magazine. But the title spanning two pages would cause problems when it was stapled together and the right alignment looked strange and might look better in a more traditional format like left aligned or justified.

To fix this I made all the text boxes justified so it was much more like a traditional newspaper layout and changed the quote to left aligned. I also split the title in two so when put together it would still be legible. I think it looks a lot better like this so im glad we had the crit as it was really helpful.